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9 changes: 8 additions & 1 deletion latest/ug/nodes/hybrid-nodes-networking.adoc
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|\https://rolesanywhere.[.replaceable]`region`.amazonaws.com
|HTTPS
|443

|Package Manager Endpoints ^3^
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|Operating System package manager endpoints ^3^

Be specific that we aren't adding other package managers.

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|Package Manager Endpoints ^3^
|Operating System package manager endpoints ^3^

|Package repository endpoints are OS-specific and may vary by geographic region.
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Replace "may" with "might", for style. "May" ends up translated as the month sometimes, "might" has fewer definitions (still several, but its our style).

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|Package repository endpoints are OS-specific and may vary by geographic region.
|Package repository endpoints are OS-specific and might vary by geographic region.

|HTTPS
|443
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[NOTE]
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^1^ Access to the {aws} SSM endpoints are only required if you are using {aws} SSM hybrid activations for your on-premises IAM credential provider.

^2^ Access to the {aws} IAM endpoints are only required if you are using {aws} IAM Roles Anywhere for your on-premises IAM credential provider.
^2^ Access to the {aws} IAM endpoints are only required if you are using {aws} IAM Roles Anywhere for your on-premises IAM credential provider.

^3^ For AL2023 and RHEL, `yum/dnf` is used to install `containerd`, `ca-certificates`, `iptables` and `amazon-ssm-agent`. For Ubuntu, `apt` is used to install `containerd`, `ca-certificates`, and `iptables`, and `snap` is used to install `amazon-ssm-agent`.
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dnf (or yum respectively) is used

Forward slashes in text break some automation that we use.

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^3^ For AL2023 and RHEL, `yum/dnf` is used to install `containerd`, `ca-certificates`, `iptables` and `amazon-ssm-agent`. For Ubuntu, `apt` is used to install `containerd`, `ca-certificates`, and `iptables`, and `snap` is used to install `amazon-ssm-agent`.
^3^ For AL2023 and RHEL, `dnf` (or `yum` respectively) is used to install `containerd`, `ca-certificates`, `iptables` and `amazon-ssm-agent`. For Ubuntu, `apt` is used to install `containerd`, `ca-certificates`, and `iptables`, and `snap` is used to install `amazon-ssm-agent`.

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Let's copy this info up into the paragraph at Line 64 too, so the list of packages for each OS isn't only in a footnote.

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[#hybrid-nodes-networking-access-reqs-ongoing]
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